Seven Deadly Copywriting Sins to Avoid At ALL Costs

Seven Deadly Copywriting Sins to Avoid


Yep, if you grew up in the Church like I did (plus attending a Christian school) you probably felt like almost EVERYTHING was a sin.

And yeah, I made plenty of mistakes along the way of life. As does everyone…

But have you ever thought about the SINS you might be making in your business??

These aren’t the kind that promise eternal darnation but MIGHT send your sales into purgatory.

So, being your friendly copywriting buddy, yours truly has written this blog post to provide a promise of SALVATION…

Well, for your business anyways…

Remember, Copywriting, the art of crafting persuasive and engaging content, is the fuel that drives marketing campaigns, draws in audiences, and ultimately, influences purchasing decisions.

However, the power of copywriting is a double-edged sword. Used effectively, it can propel a business to dizzying heights of success. But get it wrong, and the fallout can be equally impactful.

Therein lies the importance of understanding the ‘deadly sins’ of copywriting. These are common pitfalls that can turn an otherwise effective piece of copy into a damaging liability, hurting a business’s reputation and sales.

They are the unseen icebergs that can sink your ‘Titanic’ – your well-intended marketing campaign.

In the following sections, we will unmask these deadly sins one by one. We will delve into why these mistakes occur, the harm they can inflict, and most importantly, how you can avoid committing them.

Because being forewarned, as they say, is being forearmed.

So, let’s embark on this journey to save your copy from committing these deadly sins.

SIN #1 - Lack of Clarity

Our journey begins with perhaps the most cardinal of all sins in copywriting – the lack of clarity. In the race to sound impressive or unique, many fall into the trap of creating copy that’s complicated, confusing, or jargon-filled. But here’s the plain truth: if your audience can’t immediately understand your message, they won’t stick around to decipher it.

Clear, concise copy is critical for a multitude of reasons. For starters, it respects your audience’s time. In a world where consumers are bombarded with information from every direction, clear copy allows your message to be quickly grasped and, more importantly, remembered.

Moreover, clarity fosters trust. It sends the message that you are transparent, straightforward, and value the audience’s comprehension. It assures your audience that there are no hidden agendas or fine print, which can go a long way in building credibility.

On the flip side, jargon-filled or confusing copy is a rocky road. It can alienate your audience, making them feel inadequate or unqualified. It can also make your message convoluted and forgettable. And worst of all, it can cause frustration, leading your potential customer to abandon your content altogether.

In a nutshell, the lack of clarity is like walking your audience into a labyrinth and leaving them to find their way out. They’ll likely give up and leave. To avoid this deadly sin, always aim for simplicity, precision, and directness in your copy.

Remember, in the realm of copywriting, clarity is king.

SIN 2 - Ignoring Your Audience


The second deadly sin of copywriting is ignoring your audience. As strange as it may seem, it’s a surprisingly common mistake. Too often, copywriters get wrapped up in their products or services and forget who they’re writing for: the customer.

This oversight can have grave repercussions.

Knowing your audience is the foundation of effective copywriting. It’s about understanding their needs, desires, pain points, and how your product or service fits into that picture. It’s about knowing their language, their values, their concerns, and using this understanding to shape your message.

But why is this so crucial? Because your audience is the hero of your story, not your product or service. Your role is the wise mentor, guiding them towards the solution – which just so happens to be what you’re offering. You need to show them that you understand them, that you’re on their side, and that you can help them overcome their challenges or fulfill their desires.

Now, let’s consider the consequences of ignoring your audience. Imagine being in a conversation where the other person is only talking about themselves, not paying any attention to you or your needs. Frustrating, isn’t it? That’s how your audience feels when your copy doesn’t consider their needs, desires, and pain points.

Moreover, ignoring your audience results in generic, one-size-fits-all copy that lacks personalization. Such copy is unlikely to resonate with anyone. Your message becomes just another drop in the ocean of marketing noise, easily ignored and quickly forgotten.

To avoid this sin, invest time in understanding your audience. Create detailed buyer personas, conduct market research, interact with your customers. Then, use this insight to write copy that speaks directly to your audience, addresses their needs, and offers them a compelling solution. Because in the end, copywriting isn’t about you; it’s about them.

Sin 3 - NO USP

The third deadly sin of copywriting is neglecting to articulate a Unique Selling Proposition, or USP. Your USP is what sets your product or service apart from the competition. It’s that one thing (or a combination of things) that only you can offer to your customers. Essentially, it’s your competitive edge, the reason why customers should choose you over your competitors.

The significance of a USP in copywriting cannot be overstated. Your USP is the linchpin that makes your copy compelling. It’s the thread that weaves through every piece of content you create, subtly reminding your audience why they should choose you. Your USP is the answer to your customers’ most fundamental question: “What’s in it for me?”

Now, imagine what happens when you neglect to showcase your product or service’s USP. Your copy becomes bland and generic. It fails to provide a compelling reason why your audience should choose you over your competitors. The result? A sea of potential customers who can’t discern why they should pick you, leading to low engagement and even lower conversion rates.

To avoid this sin, it’s vital to define your USP clearly. Dive deep into what makes your product or service unique. Is it unmatched quality? Stellar customer service? An innovative approach? Once you’ve defined your USP, make sure it shines through in your copy, persuading your audience that you are their best choice. Remember, in a world full of choices, being unique isn’t just a nice-to-have; it’s a must-have.SIN 4 - Poorly Crafted Headlines

The fourth deadly sin in the realm of copywriting is the sin of poorly crafted headlines. The headline is your first (and sometimes, the only) chance to grab your reader’s attention. It’s the doorway into your copy, the bait that lures your audience into your content.

Think of your headline as a storefront in a busy street. A compelling, attractive storefront entices passersby to come in and explore further. A dull or confusing one, however, might not even merit a second glance. In copywriting terms, the headline sets the stage, teases the content, and promises value, all within a few short words.

Now, let’s consider the fallout of weak headlines. In today’s fast-paced, information-saturated world, consumers are constantly deciding what’s worth their time. A weak headline can’t compete for attention, leading to lower readership, fewer clicks, and reduced engagement. Essentially, a weak headline is like shouting into the void – no matter how great your content, if no one reads past the headline, it all falls on deaf ears.

So, how do you avoid this deadly sin? The answer lies in understanding what makes a headline effective. Power words, emotional triggers, clear benefits, and a hint of mystery can all contribute to a compelling headline. Remember, your goal is to pique curiosity, promising something so enticing that your audience can’t help but click to read more.

In the end, mastering the art of headline writing is a crucial skill in copywriting. A powerful headline is the first step in winning over your audience, the invitation to a conversation they won’t want to miss.

Sin 5 - Failing to Show Benefits

The fifth deadly sin of copywriting is failing to show benefits. This sin involves the mistake of focusing too much on the features of a product or service and not enough on the benefits those features bring to the customer. It’s the difference between selling a mattress and selling a good night’s sleep.

Let’s clarify the difference between features and benefits. Features are the facts about your product or service – what it does, its dimensions, its components, etc. Benefits, on the other hand, answer the question, “What’s in it for me?” from your customers’ perspective. They translate the features into advantages for the customer, showing how the product or service improves their life.

The problem with only listing features is that it makes your audience do the heavy lifting. They have to connect the dots between the features of your product or service and how those features would benefit them. This extra effort can be a significant barrier, potentially causing your audience to lose interest and move on.

For example, if you’re selling a laptop, it’s not enough to say it has a high-speed processor (feature). You need to translate that into the benefit for your customer: the ability to work more efficiently without frustrating lags, thus saving them time and reducing stress.

To avoid this deadly sin, always translate features into benefits in your copy. Make it crystal clear how your product or service can solve problems, deliver enjoyment, or provide peace of mind. Remember, people don’t buy products; they buy better versions of themselves. Show them how your product or service can deliver that transformation.

SIN 6 - Weak CTA's

Our journey into the world of copywriting sins leads us to the sixth deadly error – the weak Call-to-Action, often abbreviated as CTA. Your CTA is your final instruction to your audience, the sign that points them exactly where you want them to go next. It’s your “Buy Now,” “Sign Up,” or “Learn More” moment.

The importance of a compelling CTA is hard to overstate. It’s the climax of your copy, the point where your persuasion efforts culminate in a clear, direct request. A well-crafted CTA creates a sense of urgency, incites emotion, or offers value, making it irresistible for your audience to take the desired action.

On the flip side, a weak CTA is like a weak handshake – it leaves your audience feeling unsure and unimpressed. It lacks the power to motivate them to take the next step. It’s vague, unexciting, or worst of all, non-existent. And the outcome? Low conversion rates. After all, if you don’t confidently ask for the action, how can you expect your audience to confidently take it?

Avoiding this sin involves understanding what makes a CTA effective. It should be clear, commanding, and create a sense of urgency. It should play on your audience’s emotions, compelling them to act now. But most importantly, it should offer value, promising your audience a benefit that’s too good to resist.

So, ensure your CTA is as strong as possible, because a compelling call-to-action can be the difference between a prospect and a conversion. After all, in the world of copywriting, it’s not just about what you say, but how you prompt your audience to respond.

Sin 7 = Not Proofreading

The seventh and final deadly sin of copywriting is not proofreading. While it may seem minor compared to understanding your audience or crafting compelling CTAs, not taking the time to proofread can severely damage your credibility.

Proofreading is the final quality check before your copy goes live. It ensures that your text is free from grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and awkward phrasing. It’s the polishing step that makes your copy shine, ensuring it’s not just persuasive, but also professional and polished.

The importance of error-free copy cannot be overstated. Mistakes in your copy not only distract readers but can also give an unprofessional impression. Think about it: if a brand doesn’t care enough to correct typos or fix grammatical errors in its content, what does that say about the attention they pay to their products or services?

Moreover, errors can confuse your message, making it hard for readers to understand what you’re trying to convey. This confusion can lead to lower engagement, decreased trust, and ultimately, reduced sales.

To avoid this deadly sin, make proofreading a non-negotiable part of your copywriting process. Use tools like Grammarly or Hemingway App to help catch errors, but don’t rely on them entirely. Take the time to read your copy aloud, or even better, have someone else review it. A fresh pair of eyes can often spot things you might have missed.

Remember, your copy is a reflection of your brand. A meticulously proofread copy not only enhances readability but also boosts your brand’s image and credibility. So, take the time to make your copy as flawless as it can be – your reputation depends on it.


As our journey through the seven deadly sins of copywriting comes to an end, it’s time to take a step back and reflect on what we’ve learned. We’ve navigated the treacherous waters of lack of clarity, ignorance of the audience, absent unique selling propositions, poorly crafted headlines, feature-focus without benefit translation, weak CTAs, and the careless mistake of not proofreading. These are not mere pitfalls; they are deadly sins that can cripple your copywriting and your brand’s performance.

The reality is that effective copywriting is both an art and a science. It requires a clear understanding of your audience, a knack for crafting compelling messages, and an eagle eye for polishing every line until it shines. The cost of these sins isn’t just low engagement or poor conversion rates, but the tarnishing of your brand’s image and credibility.

But worry not, the antidote to these sins lies in the value of professional copywriting services. A professional copywriter understands the power of words, the nuances of persuasion, and the importance of precision. They know how to steer clear of these sins, crafting copy that resonates, engages, and most importantly, converts.

So, whether you’re a business owner aiming to skyrocket your sales, or a marketer looking to engage your audience more effectively, remember the importance of crafting sin-free copy. And when in doubt, remember that a professional copywriter is just a call away.

In the end, the path to successful copywriting is a journey of continuous learning, refining, and improving. Remember, the devil is in the detail – or in this case, the sins of your copy. Avoid them, and the heavens of high engagement, solid conversions, and a strong brand image await you.

Interested in creating powerful, effective, and sin-free copy? I’m here to help! Feel free to reach out for a free consultation. Let’s transform your copywriting from sin-filled to spectacular together!

What to do Now

It’s time to say goodbye to the seven deadly sins of copywriting and embrace a brighter, more engaging, and conversion-optimized future for your brand. The first step is easy – all it takes is a click!

As a seasoned direct response copywriter, I can guide you through the ins and outs of effective copywriting, ensuring your brand stands out for all the right reasons. With a strong focus on results, together we can craft compelling copy that speaks directly to your audience, avoids common pitfalls, and drives your business forward.

Why stumble through the wilderness of copywriting sins when you can take a well-lit path towards effective, persuasive copy that truly connects with your audience? Remember, the power of words can either make or break your business. So, isn’t it time you gave your brand the copy it truly deserves?

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About the Author

Robert Sean Pascoe is a direct response copywriter and marketing strategist who works with entrepreneurs worldwide to create advertising and marketing campaigns that MAXIMIZE their profits.

He (obviously) LOVES Rock N Roll, old school pro wrestling, Star Wars and pretty much ANYTHING 1980’s.

With 7 years of freelance copywriting experience and a lifetime in sales, Robert knows how to use the power of words to sell virtually anything to anyone, especially if the market has been properly defined (and you BETTER have that right!).

Robert enjoys primarily working with small business owners to sell more of their products and services through the power of direct response advertising and marketing.

He has written sales copy for companies in such diverse niches as Weight Loss Supplements, Skin Care, Male Enhancement, Local Marketing Agencies, Live Event Seminars, Software Developers, Insurance Agencies, Real Estate Brokerages, Marketing Consultants, and many, many more.

If you need some help crafting a KILLER sales message that puts more of the GREEN stuff in your pocket than contact Robert now.

Freelance Direct Response Copywriter Robert Sean Pascoe

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